For this post, you should write your own haiku!
(Read the information below for inspiration. The only requirement is that your poem be a true haiku, with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third!)
What is haiku?
Haiku is a Japanese poetry form. The best haiku uses just a few words to capture a moment and create a picture in the reader's mind. It is like a tiny window into a scene much larger than itself.
In English, haiku is normally written in three lines, with five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and five syllables in the third line.
Haiku example
Here's a haiku poem written by a poetry student:
The last winter leaves
Clinging to the black branches
Explode into birds.
Characteristics of haiku
The following are typical of haiku:
- A focus on nature.
- A "season word" such as "snow" which tells the reader what time of year it is.
- A division somewhere in the poem, which focuses first on one thing, then on another. The relationship between these two parts is sometimes surprising.
- Instead of saying how a scene makes him or her feel, the poet shows the details that caused that emotion. If the sight of an empty winter sky made the poet feel lonely, describing that sky can give the same feeling to the reader.
This blog prompt was taken from the following website:
http://www.creative-writing-now.com/how-to-write-a-haiku.html
My haiku
ReplyDeleteI love to eat pie
Chicken in pie is very good
That's why I like pie.
I like sports at Field
ReplyDeleteSchool. My favorite sport there
is lacrosse practice.
Ian Clickner
I put the cat on
ReplyDeletethe dryer then she slipped off,
creating a laugh.
These look great so far! Owen, I would change "very" to "quite" to get the syllable count right.
ReplyDeletePizza is awesome
ReplyDeletePizza is quite delicious
I adore Pizza
ducks are good and cool
ReplyDeleteI like ducks a lot always
chickens are awesome
bear haiku
Deletebears are dangerous
bears hibernate in winter
bears climb lots of trees
I like soccer soccer is cool
ReplyDeletesoccer is fun
i like soccer and football
John Paul
ReplyDeleteI like MW3 online,
ReplyDeleteonline multi-player=fun
MW3 is very, very fun
Cheely
soccer is the best
ReplyDeletesoccer you shoot in a goal
soccer beats the rest
CCCLLLAAAYYY!!!!!!!!
Tomatoes are red
ReplyDeleteThey taste really yucky
To Sebastian Cave
the sparkling flakes fall
ReplyDeletethe sun begins to shiver
through the eclipsed night
The one above is Arlo
ReplyDeleteThe skate boarder drops,
ReplyDeletedown into the pipe he goes,
then he skates away.
Running through the woods
ReplyDeleteprancing with her doe,
walking to find food across the street.
Cleve
Ben Drake said...
ReplyDeleteThe ham is barking
It wants some soup and crackers
Finally it eats.